' Prompt No. 9: [link]
Inspired by Femme 138
Found this idea and just went along with it... at least I'm writing. Please tell me what you think.
Check out the rest of the submissions here: [link]
A fruity poem worth reading: Swollen Cherry
EDIT: Oh gee, thank you so much! I was down with a fever for most of yesterday, so seeing this is more than enough consolation for this dang cold. This poem felt like a 'breakthrough' of sorts for me, so I'm really happy that it was chosen. What more can I say than: VIVE LA POESIE!
edit(2): wanted to fix the end for a while, finally decided to get it done with. I think it's better, not sure if I should've just cut out the last two strophes.